Building Characters & Descriptions - Writers Challenge #1
He reached down and took the stone for himself. vs. The wrinkled old creature stretched out his decrepit arm to grasp the stone from the cold dead hand of Prentos. "You will not have control over the source of my power, even in death," he delighted as he pulled the stone close. Who do you picture in these two scenario's? The first, someone is picking up a stone. Other than that, there is nothing else to tell you... well, anything. Writing descriptively is so important on so many levels, you want your audience to feel as they read. The first sentence has no feeling and adds nor leaves anything to the imagination. Someone reached down and picked something up. The second sentence says the same as the first, someone picked something up. Though t he difference between the two is tremendous. Let's break down the second sentence. Who is that someone that picked something up? We don't know. That creates m...